I wouldn't say your hopeless but you've got a long way to go. There is nothing wrong with the quality of your voice in my opinion. The main thing I see is that you lack confidence. The timidity oozes from your voice. And that monotone thing, ya there's some of that in there as well. Keep on practicing and taking lessons, don't give up. There's nothing going on in your voice that can't be overcome. And thanks for using soundclick, it's a lot easier on those of us that are stuck with dialup.
Nobody cares how much you know,
until they know how much you care.
"What you keep to yourself you lose, what you give away you keep forever." -Axel Munthe