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week 25- Marv

The Sunday Songwriters club is a stretching exercise for your mind. Arpeggios for the brain cells, so to speak. After all, writing is like playing - to get better, you have to practice.

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Postby bluenotefla » April 19th, 2004, 8:14 am

I like both sets I would love to see how this one turns out.

"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"



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Postby Tattooed » April 22nd, 2004, 7:40 am

"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
Your lack of caring was so subtle

"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though your presence seems to loom
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Postby Tattooed » April 22nd, 2004, 8:38 am

Another thought.

"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though I feel your presence in the room
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