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by bluenotefla » April 19th, 2004, 8:14 am
I like both sets I would love to see how this one turns out.
"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
Frank
Life is not what you did. It's what you are doing.
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by Tattooed » April 22nd, 2004, 7:40 am
"The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I'd never even noticed I'd been crying"
Your lack of caring was so subtle
"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though your presence seems to loom
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by Tattooed » April 22nd, 2004, 8:38 am
Another thought.
"It's been two days
But I can still smell your perfume"
Still I miss you
Though I feel your presence in the room
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