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Postby Dictator » February 3rd, 2004, 5:35 pm

This is a rough song.  Kinda came to me at work and I didn't write it down so it sounds kinda shaky.  help is very appreciated

Nails in my hands and feet
Burning surges are irrate
Bleeding flesh an open wound
Crying I'll bleed for you
Dream world a big mistake
Worst fear is I'm a fake

My dreams are fading,
They're cracked and broken
Just like that,
Black and White portrait of my life

I've lost my Faith
Downed with guilt
And I've gone insane
Tring to wash in Filth
Self's dark entity
Fake fading into me

My dreams are fading,
They're cracked and broken
Just like that,
Black and White portrait of my life

Everything I've been taught, is all part of it
Everyone I've had as friends, They've all died.
Everthing I wanted to do, makes me have a fit
Everyone I wanted to know, They were all lies

My dreams are fading,
They're cracked and broken
Just like that,
Black and White portrait of my life
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