It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

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chefie
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It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

Post by chefie » January 13th, 2018, 10:34 am

Doesn't seem to be much going on in this forum lately. Maybe a New Year Resurgence? Still, any comments or suggestions are appreciated.

IT DOESN'T HURT ANYMORE

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Every time I saw you, things didn’t seem quite the same
every time I talked to you, I wondered if we’d ever talk again
when we dreamed of our future, everything was about you
and you changed your mind everyday, and I couldn’t keep up with you

now every time I think of you and I think of you every day
so much was left unsaid still I don’t know what else I would say
I don’t know who you are anymore or where my love has gone
and I’m left here all by myself singing this lonely song

it doesn’t hurt anymore
still, I must confess
though it doesn’t hurt anymore
it doesn’t hurt any less

It’s been a period of adjustment just trying to start a new life
but it’s so hard to go forward when the one I left I thought was right
I turn my focus elsewhere, and hopefully all will be fine
but I’m just not quite myself anymore, it’s as if left something behind

I ask myself what it was but I’m still not ready to admit
that what ever it was I left behind wasn’t really a good fit
you had your dreams, and I’ve already lived mine
love lost its reason, love lost its rhyme

no, it doesn’t hurt any more
still, I must confess
though it doesn’t hurt anymore
though it doesn’t hurt anymore
though it doesn’t hurt anymore
it doesn’t hurt any less
it doesn’t hurt any less

LessPaul
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Re: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

Post by LessPaul » January 13th, 2018, 4:15 pm

good tune, what are you recording on?

chefie
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Re: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

Post by chefie » January 13th, 2018, 4:35 pm

A $10 mic on my PC using Audacity. Thanks for the comment.
Neil

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Re: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

Post by LessPaul » January 13th, 2018, 5:06 pm

It sounds low fi. Which is fine if that's what you want. My only suggestion would be to invest in the recording equipment. I, personally, would love to hear your tunes higher fi.

Maybe you already have the stuff and this is just a scratch track idk. either way, nice tune man!

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