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by BarnaBus RoX
January 30th, 2014, 4:34 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 3761

Re: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

Hi Vic Well I had to write something or you would be on my case :P It is a very very very rough draft , I thought post it an show Mr Lewis I am at least trying the topic " theme " as much as I struggle ding that :P Why can't Death be emanate ? Emanate means to send or come forth - Death is coming fo...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 30th, 2014, 3:34 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language
Replies: 18
Views: 3761

Y12 W12a ( aka W13 ) Adult language

If course language offends then do not read any further I have no title for this - Was watching an American Crime show an it just came to me as I watched - Maybe I should call it C.S.I ...lol Every one had feared him Tho not many had seen him He lived on his reputation Intimidating in every situati...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 29th, 2014, 2:49 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12W13 - Nobody's As Good As That w/mp3
Replies: 12
Views: 1829

Re: Y12W13 - Nobody's As Good As That

Hi there

Yes I agree with the great start comments - I am jealous because I only have 1 line in my head that would suit the topic ...

Keep on writing :)

Trev.. :note1: :note2: :note2: :note1: :note2: :note2:
by BarnaBus RoX
January 29th, 2014, 2:45 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG12 - Week12 - Watching listening - now with mp3
Replies: 12
Views: 1715

Re: SSG12 - Week12 - Watching listening - now with mp3

Loving the MP3 Paul -
Makes me want to chill out mon ( :D :D )
Love listening to your guitar playing and singing :)

Great job :note1: :note2: :note2: :note1: :note2: :note2:
by BarnaBus RoX
January 25th, 2014, 3:02 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12W12 - None for All
Replies: 5
Views: 905

Re: Y12W12 - None for All

Hey Hobson I am really liking this I love that 1 st Verse ! Brilliant ! Not liking the chorus as much tho , I know what your saying here but it just sounds awkward to me - No more handshakes across the aisle It just not fitting as tight as the rest - In my opinion any way not that holds much lol I w...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 25th, 2014, 2:53 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W11
Replies: 8
Views: 1391

Re: Y12 W11

Thank you Hobson :) It is something I am really struggling with - My original idea was to have all the negatives at the start of the song aka I lost my soul in Ellen Avenue then at the end of the song to have I found my soul in Ellen Avenue And so on but the story in between is all muddled an clashe...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 22nd, 2014, 11:42 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: YR 12 Wk 9 Whatever MP3 added
Replies: 8
Views: 1844

Re: YR 12 Wk 9 Whatever MP3 added

Hi Kathy - WOW I got to hear you sing , that is the 1 st time I think I have ever heard you sing - I might be wrong but I am sure I would have remembered THAT voice ! I don't have a lot to offer you on this except - It's darn GOOD ! Loved it Loved it Loved it - The wife thought I was playing Amy Gra...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 22nd, 2014, 11:36 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W9 - Whatever.
Replies: 7
Views: 1198

Re: Y12 W9 - Whatever.

Hey hey Mr Lewis :) (V1)The things that I like are no good for me, They're immoral, unhealthy or non-PC, But the things I hate are all so splendid, And all come highly recommended? That is so cool :) I read that an said , jee wizz Vic get off my Face Book page an writing songs about me ..ha ha ha ha...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 22nd, 2014, 11:33 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W9 Here Comes The Royal Whatever
Replies: 6
Views: 1205

Re: Y12 W9 Here Comes The Royal Whatever

Hi Andy

What a cool concept , finger picking an talking , My kind of music :)
Loved this line ..
a society of animal products
Great piece ..

Trev.. :D :D :note2: :note2: :note1: :note2: :note2: :note1:
by BarnaBus RoX
January 22nd, 2014, 11:27 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12W12 Thank you, Father (A tribute to Nelson Mandela)
Replies: 12
Views: 2180

Re: Y12W12 Thank you, Father (A tribute to Nelson Mandela)

Hey James I thought I commented on this a week ago - I know the wife an I both listened to the recording , ( might be my old age catching up on me :) ) When I saw the it was about Nelson Mandela or a tribute to him . I was expecting a tribal sort of thing an was surprised to read the lyrics an the M...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 22nd, 2014, 11:22 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W11
Replies: 8
Views: 1391

Re: Y12 W11

Thanks James - I have no idea where I am going with this - but I don't want to discard it just yet , been too long doodling with it :)
Thanks again

Trev... :note1: :note2: :note2: :note1: :note2: :note2: :note1:
by BarnaBus RoX
January 21st, 2014, 1:00 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W11
Replies: 8
Views: 1391

Re: Y12 W11

Thank you Mr Brady ;) Yes I understand what you and Vic are saying an this is a major work in progress lol - I love how it starts an Keep finger picking some Open chords an humming it - I have been stuck at this point for far too long - Might just play some Chords in Drop D and crack the amp up an s...
by BarnaBus RoX
January 20th, 2014, 3:18 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG12 - Week12 - Watching listening - now with mp3
Replies: 12
Views: 1715

Re: SSG12 - Week12 - Watching listening

Hey Mr Brady :) Naturally I don't know how fast or the melody you have for this so this might be totally wrong - This is how I keep reading it :) Do you know they're watching you watching all the things you do from the first step in the morning to the last breath [*in the evening] < My little edit ....
by BarnaBus RoX
January 19th, 2014, 6:19 pm
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12 W11
Replies: 8
Views: 1391

Re: Y12 W11

WOW ... What can I say Vic , thank you for the brilliant advice and yeah I know what your are talking about in every sentence - I have never stopped writing I just found it hard and harder to follow a theme that someone else set - Then all my surgeries happened an I just lost my way a bit - I m glad...