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by chefie
May 19th, 2018, 6:00 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Help with lyrics
Replies: 3
Views: 749

Re: Help with lyrics

You've certainly made some progress since your last posting. Just some thoughts . . . . . . . your last 2 verses seem to be the beginning of the story for me. You've a relationship that hopefully will last but you're going to take it one day at a time while being, hopefully, each true to one's self ...
by chefie
February 17th, 2018, 7:14 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: A work in progress
Replies: 4
Views: 428

Re: A work in progress

Hi John,

Good rewrite. Your elimination of the "Martin" verse was a good self edit. In retrospect it didn't fit. Nice work.

Neil
by chefie
February 15th, 2018, 4:48 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: A work in progress
Replies: 4
Views: 428

Re: A work in progress

HI John, Nice to see you on the forum again. I really like this. Great descriptive verses and a nice story twist in the end. An idea for a slight tweak . . . . when he lost his jobs, it was always a mistake might be good to specify if it was "his" mistake or "their." Any chance for music in the futu...
by chefie
January 13th, 2018, 4:35 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore
Replies: 3
Views: 494

Re: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

A $10 mic on my PC using Audacity. Thanks for the comment.
Neil
by chefie
January 13th, 2018, 10:34 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: It Doesn't Hurt Anymore
Replies: 3
Views: 494

It Doesn't Hurt Anymore

Doesn't seem to be much going on in this forum lately. Maybe a New Year Resurgence? Still, any comments or suggestions are appreciated. IT DOESN'T HURT ANYMORE https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&genre=Acoustic&songid=13678722&q=hi Every time I saw you, things didn’t seem quit...
by chefie
September 24th, 2017, 6:59 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Hey Everyone
Replies: 1
Views: 613

Hey Everyone

Just wondering how many of you are still out there waiting for the Sunday Songwriters Group to start up again?

Neil
by chefie
August 8th, 2017, 10:14 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: You Wake Up
Replies: 3
Views: 965

Re: You Wake Up

Thanks, John. Very much appreciated.

Neil
by chefie
July 30th, 2017, 7:40 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: You Wake Up
Replies: 3
Views: 965

You Wake Up

YOU WAKE UP for David http://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13607488&q=hi You wake up one morning, don’t know that it’s not just another day There isn’t any warning, so you just go on in the same old way Dark coffee and good friends not thinking it might some day end work...
by chefie
July 14th, 2017, 9:32 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again
Replies: 2
Views: 832

Re: I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

Thanks, John. I totally agree with you.

Neil
by chefie
July 9th, 2017, 4:09 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again
Replies: 2
Views: 832

I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again

I'll Never Fall in Love for the First Time Again Been working on songs never finished . . . . . http://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13597751&q=hi I came home feeling something that I’ve never felt before butterflies in my stomach, my feet off the floor had a smile so wi...
by chefie
July 9th, 2017, 4:05 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: IF
Replies: 4
Views: 937

Re: IF

Thanks, Renee.
Neil
by chefie
July 8th, 2017, 5:29 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: IF
Replies: 4
Views: 937

Re: IF

Thanks John. Your comments are really appreciated.

Neil
by chefie
July 7th, 2017, 2:52 pm
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: IF
Replies: 4
Views: 937

IF

IF Another song inspired by the words of that famous writer . . . . . I. M. Anonymous http://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13596705&q=hi If I never met you, I wouldn't like you. If I didn't like you, I wouldn't love you. If I didn't love you, I wouldn't miss you. But I d...
by chefie
July 3rd, 2017, 11:00 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: It's the Little Things
Replies: 6
Views: 1117

Re: It's the Little Things

Thanks John.

Neil
by chefie
July 2nd, 2017, 8:43 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: It's the Little Things
Replies: 6
Views: 1117

Re: It's the Little Things

Hi Renee,

Gosh, no need to apologize. On first read you simply responded to what you felt at the time. I can easily see your point of view. By my asking the question "what" . . . . . I'm opening up the possibility of there being an different answer than the one I had projected.

Neil