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by Geedub81
May 13th, 2014, 6:40 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: Y12W27 That’s How the Song Goes
Replies: 10
Views: 1033

Re: Y12W27 That’s How the Song Goes

Hello James, I'm a little late to the party to offer a review but I've been wanting to get involved in this forum so better late than never… The first time I read through your lyrics they evoked a feeling of tawdry sadness that set me up for some of the more direct lines and those contrasting feelin...
by Geedub81
May 12th, 2014, 10:13 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG Year 12 Week 27
Replies: 5
Views: 768

Re: SSG Year 12 Week 27

Thanks everyone for reading and/or listening and for your comments! I very much appreciate your feedback and would like to follow up. This is one of those in which the lyrics came pretty much all at once and it was while I was watching an episode of Star Trek Deep Space Nine :D . The further I follo...
by Geedub81
May 7th, 2014, 8:26 am
Forum: Sunday Songwriters Group
Topic: SSG Year 12 Week 27
Replies: 5
Views: 768

SSG Year 12 Week 27

Newbie/lurker with a confession/disclaimer here... I've been looking for the chance to post in this forum and a couple of times started writing but didn't get far enough to be able to post anything. When I saw this weeks topic I thought I would post one of my songs but I have two confessions to make...
by Geedub81
February 21st, 2014, 10:52 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: I just don't understand...
Replies: 7
Views: 4191

Re: I just don't understand...

Hi Rachel, I can relate to your frustration but can also offer some words of encouragement. I've been a musician all my life who has wanted to write for many years but never felt like I could. This past summer I found a way forward and am happy to say that I've written a number of songs that I feel ...
by Geedub81
February 21st, 2014, 9:18 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: New original - hoping for feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 2476

Re: New original - hoping for feedback

Hi Vic, Thanks for the feedback and I agree with your comment on the bass line. I had the chance to jam on it with friends this past weekend and it really helped fill it in. Given my situation it looks like it would do me some good to acquire some DAW skills so I could track some of these myself. Al...
by Geedub81
February 15th, 2014, 7:54 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: New original - hoping for feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 2476

New original - hoping for feedback

Hello Everyone, I'm hoping to get some feedback for a song I just finished. There are a couple of bumps in the performance but it was my first take and I decided it was good enough for a rough cut. The Ties That Bind V1 I know you did your best To help her find her way But life is more than just a t...
by Geedub81
August 19th, 2013, 10:23 am
Forum: Hear Here
Topic: First original song
Replies: 1
Views: 571

First original song

Hello Everyone, I posted this in a different forum but realize that it probably should have gone here instead. Even though I've been playing for over thirty I just recently started writing music. Last night I made a rough recording of my first song and would like some feedback. The recording was mad...
by Geedub81
August 19th, 2013, 9:56 am
Forum: Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
Topic: Feedback please?
Replies: 1
Views: 2391

Feedback please?

Hello, I'm new to the site but have been playing guitar for over thirty years. I just recently started trying to write a few songs and have a "rough draft" of my first original song. The recording itself is a little rough (I recorded on voice memo from my iPhone) and because I was posting it for a c...